I kept waiting for the story to breathe, but the prose keeps crashing in waves of purple surf. Every gust is explained twice, every cloud named, every metaphor stacked until it wobbles. It is exhausting!
The opening theft of the Peregrine hums, then the plot loosens like slack rigging. One quest feeds another, then another, set-piece after set-piece until the stakes blur into noise. Why must every choice be underlined in triplicate?
Point of view wanders at the worst moments. Cassian's austere math breaks into sudden sentiment, then we are yanked to Tamsin's instincts with no tether. The result feels like head-hopping that sands off tension.
The lore that should dazzle comes out as homework. Star-charts drop like footnotes, the Jade Lyre is teased to death, and the march toward Morwen Reef feels preordained. I wanted awe and got exposition.
The romance flickers hot, then stalls, then repeats the same banter loop while Isola Crane steals scenes and renders the central pair smaller. By the time bone-galleons thunder in and the Iron Fleet tightens its net, fatigue wins. The dragons whisper, but the novel shouts.