Riddles in the Mist

Riddles in the Mist

Fantasy · 512 pages · Published 2024-03-12 · Avg 3.3★ (6 reviews)

It is no longer safe for Kellan Marrow at the Veiled Academy of Spirehaven. After the shattering of the Bone Bell and the fall of the North Gate, the Academy's halls are watched by fog-eyed sentries, and the Mire-King's mark blooms on doors like lichen. With Pira Flint, a quick-tempered inkwright, and Daxen Holt, a stonecutter who hears fault lines sing, Kellan slips into exile along the Greyshore. Before he vanished into the mist, Archivist Sorell Dune left them three riddles—etched in salt on a shard of lighthouse glass—hinting at how to unmake the Mire-King's tether to the Unstill Fog. The trio must decipher what "the name that was sung before the tide learned time," "the lock that never closes," and "the harbor with no shore" truly are, while outpacing glassjaw hounds, fogbound inquisitors, and the long reach of the Regent's black barges. Their odyssey carries them from the wind-churned markets of Orrin's Drift to the drowned orchards of Mournfen, through the cliff caverns of Larkfell where echoes carry memory, and across the Snow-Stair to Vaeld, where maps are woven from frost. Allies rise in unlikely places—a chorus of gutter-mages in Candlecut, a lighthouse-keeper guarding the last Sable Lantern, a hull-less chorus-ship that sails on sound—yet loyalties fray, and choices cut deeper than any blade. The end draws them back to where Kellan's mist-marked path began: beneath the storm-struck lenses of Beacon's End, the first tower that taught him to read fog. Shattering revelations, last-minute turns of allegiance, and newly discovered magics—knot-songs that bind weather, tidewriting that remakes memory, and the perilous Naming of Salt—drive toward a reckoning that answers who stilled the Sea-Oracle, what became of Kellan's mother, and why the mists whisper "Marrow" at dawn. Above all, this storm-lit tale declares that choice, not prophecy, steers the helm, and that love—though it cannot bar death—gives the living their compass.

In the Greyshore Cycle, twelve-year-old Kellan Marrow begins as a dockrunner in Gloam with a knack for knots and an ear for weather. When a lantern-flare on Beacon's End answers a question he has never spoken aloud, he is taken to the Veiled Academy to study windlore, tidecraft, and the delicate art of reading mist. But as the Mire-King rises from legend to smother the coast in fog, Kellan learns the truth about his family, his scar that shines like moonwater, and the hollow in his past where a name should be. Alongside fierce friendship and a chosen family of harborfolk, tinkers, and scholars, he finds the courage to face a hunger older than the sea itself. Haunting and immersive, these salt-stung adventures bring a tactile world to life—perfect for solitary voyages or reading aloud while rain drums on the windows.

Elijah Bowman is an American fantasy novelist and former map librarian raised on the tidal flats of coastal Maine. He earned a degree in geography from the University of Vermont in 2009 and later worked in a maritime archive, cataloging ship logs and tide charts that shaped his fascination with fog, folklore, and the cartography of imagined coasts. His short fiction has appeared in regional journals and small-press anthologies, and he has taught community workshops on worldbuilding and myth-making. Bowman lives in Providence, Rhode Island, where he hikes, cooks too much soup in winter, and shares a narrow house with his partner and a rescue dog named Alder.

Ratings & Reviews

Janelle Rowan
2025-08-12

Readers who admire the sea grit of The Bone Ships and the map-sketched mystery of The Girl of Ink & Stars may be intrigued, but this outing felt swollen with set pieces. The glassjaw hounds, the black barges, the choral ship, the Snow-Stair - each dazzles, yet together they crowd the central riddle.

The result, for me, is distance from the crew at exactly the moments meant to bind us. I wanted more time inside Kellan before the next chase kicked up, and fewer cryptic clues that read like aesthetic rather than necessity.

Lena Koskinen
2025-05-06

Choice over script is the helm here, and the book keeps returning to how love fixes bearings even when it cannot bar loss. I liked how the riddles pose moral weight as well as plot tasks, especially the idea of "a harbor without a shore": belonging defined by people, not place. Some beats still resolve in convenient surges of magic, which blurs the message, but the dawn whispers of Marrow linger.

Theo Alvarez
2025-01-11

This world tastes of salt and iron. Markets at Orrin's Drift clatter, Mournfen orchards sag with drowned fruit, and in Larkfell the very echo remembers you. Magic obeys tactile rules - names are spoken with grain, songs bind weather, maps weave frost in Vaeld - and each cost feels like a chafe on skin.

The Mire-King is more mood than monster, a pressure in the lungs, and the fogbound inquisitors carry that menace into every quay. By the time the Sable Lantern flares and the chorus-ship sings, the stakes read as coastal survival rather than abstract destiny.

Priya Deshmukh
2024-08-02

Kellan reads like a kid who learned caution the hard way, always bracing for the fog to listen. Pira's flares of temper mask an ethic of care, and Daxen's stone-sense gives him quiet authority; their banter cuts through the murk and keeps choices human. The found-family notes ring clear when gutter-mages and lighthouse keepers step in, and the loyalty fractures feel earned rather than contrived.

Mara Levine
2024-04-15

The prose leans lyrical without floating away, salted with inventions like knot-songs and tidewriting, and the author keeps metaphors aligned to weather and water. Chapters often close on an image rather than a bang, which gives the book a tidal cadence.

Structure-wise we track Kellan cleanly, but mid-journey the clue trail wavers and a few scenes in Mournfen linger past their welcome. When the shard riddle surfaces again the momentum tightens, and the final approach to Beacon's End rewards patient readers.

Gideon Pike
2024-03-22

Fog, riddles, and narrow escapes follow Kellan from Orrin's Drift to Beacon's End; the chase breathes hard, yet pauses just long enough for the clues to click.

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