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Hidden Death

Horror · 328 pages · Published 2024-09-10 · Avg 3.7★ (6 reviews)

Part salt-scarred folk horror and part razor-edged coming-of-age, Hidden Death drags its claws through a harbor town where the dead never drift far. Eighteen-year-old Renata Cole has been yanked from a Boston arts program and sent back to Daggerpoint, Massachusetts, to help her grandmother keep the creaking boardinghouse afloat. The town breathes by the tide and bleeds rust; the Dockmen's Brotherhood rules the wharf with quiet prayers and curfew bells. Up before dawn. Floors to scrub. Keys that never leave the hook. Phones surrendered to a dented biscuit tin. Strangers watched until they're not strangers anymore.

Renata falls in with harbor kids Mira Danvers and Jasper Osei, who tend eel weirs along the flats, and Tomás Vale, a lobsterer's son who knows every reef by feel. One fog-thick night they dare each other across the channel to the shuttered quarantine hospital on Bracken Shoal. They go for the murals rumored to flicker in lamplight, for contraband bottles sealed in old plaster, for a rumor that if you shout your name into the cistern, the bay learns it. The night is electric—brine on their tongues, a lantern hissing, a speaker coughing up sea songs—until it blurs.

Morning breaks like a bruise. Renata wakes in her own bed with her hair stiff with salt, sand braided in the sheets, and a raw scrape she can't place. Around her throat lies a length of eelgrass, knotted into the same sailor's bend she's never learned. Her phone is back on the dresser, battery dead, camera smeared with something oily. None of them remember the row home. And Tomás is missing.

As flyers curl on telephone poles and the harbor coughs up offerings—tar-black feathers stuck with fish scales, a brass bell that tolls only under water, a porpoise jaw etched with map lines—Renata digs into the town's underlayer: the quarantine ward that burned, a strike broken on a moonless night, a promise signed in blood and salt. Chased by watchful elders and something older moving in the kelp, Renata, Mira, and Jasper race the neap tide to decipher the knots, the murals, and the bell's drowned code before the Brotherhood's midsummer Vigil seals the harbor and the debt comes due. In Daggerpoint, what's hidden isn't gone—it waits where the channel runs darkest, counting heartbeats.

Johnson, Maria is a coastal New England–based writer and former crime reporter. Born in Corpus Christi, Texas, in 1986, she studied anthropology and journalism at the University of Texas at Austin before moving to Providence, Rhode Island, where she covered small-town courts and waterfront labor for a regional paper. Her short fiction has appeared in indie magazines and anthologies focused on dark folklore and maritime myth. When not writing, she volunteers with a lighthouse preservation group and hikes tidal flats with a field notebook. She lives with her partner and a retired harbor cat in a drafty apartment within earshot of foghorns.

Ratings & Reviews

Martin Devereux
2026-01-29

As a school librarian, I wanted to champion this for seniors, but the intensity is relentless and the atmosphere pins you to the floor. I left frustrated and unsure who I could safely hand this to.

Content notes for educators: a missing teen, ritual-adjacent pressure from a secretive group, frequent curfew bells, references to a burned ward and a broken strike, and a scene where a knot lies at a character's throat. The sense of surveillance is constant, and I flinched more than once.

Stylistically, the foggy blackout on Bracken Shoal and the phone surrender to a biscuit tin lean into control in a way that felt punishing rather than reflective. Students looking for a clear moral line may get lost in the murk.

The middle sags under slabs of lore when many teen readers would need firmer anchors. The Vigil countdown should tighten the thread, yet it drifts and the tension curdles.

Who it might suit: adult horror clubs, coastal folklore aficionados, readers who want salt, rust, and slow-burn dread. For my classroom shelves, I will pass and suggest titles with sturdier boundaries and clearer aftercare.

Grace Villalobos
2025-11-03

The book worries its themes the way tide worries rope. Debt, secrecy, and the weight of inheritance braid through every scene, with art acting as witness and warning.

I liked the idea that "what's hidden isn't gone" and how the murals and sailor knots carry that thought, but a few late conversations spell the point a bit plainly. Mixed, but the resonance lingers like salt on skin.

Rowan Pelletier
2025-06-20

Daggerpoint is the star: a harbor town that prays by bells and keeps its rules in salt. The Dockmen's Brotherhood reads like a union braided with a parish, watchful and pragmatic. The quarantine hospital on Bracken Shoal hums with soot and silence, and the bay's offerings - a porpoise jaw etched like charts, a brass bell that tolls only when drowned - sketch quiet laws for the horror to obey. Stakes never leave the shoreline yet feel huge because the debt is communal as much as personal.

Siena Mbaye
2025-01-11

This sings as a character piece. Renata's interiority pricks and aches, caught between duty and the raw pull of the water; the eelgrass at her throat sits like a dare she refuses to accept.

Mira and Jasper talk like kids who learned weather before textbooks, sharp and precise. Tomás is most present in absence, and that ache arranges every choice the trio makes. Dialogue snaps without quips, and the friendship tangle feels earned.

Lucas Park
2024-10-02

The prose is salt-bitten and deliberate, all wet wood and iron, with verbs that sting. Structure rides the tide, chapters swelling around the Bracken Shoal night and ebbing into hush after, so the book breathes with the harbor. Recurring images - knots, bells that answer under water, murals that seem to shift - lock the motif in place.

Pacing stumbles only when exposition about the Brotherhood's past piles up, but the language keeps a steady hum and the final approach to the Vigil clicks into place without cheap tricks.

Amina Cordell
2024-09-15

Fog, curfews, and a vanished friend pull like a rip current; the plot moves in tidelike surges as Renata chases the eelgrass knot and the bell's code toward a bruised dawn.

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