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Shattered Target

Thriller · 368 pages · Published 2025-06-10 · Avg 2.2★ (6 reviews)

Some warnings arrive too late to matter. Mara Lin, a risk modeler at Archer and Plaut in Chicago, lives with an algorithm for everything—how long a hospital will take to default, which storms will bankrupt a carrier, the odds that her husband, an ER doctor at Northwestern Memorial, will come home before midnight. She has a corner loft in the West Loop, a closet of sleek suits that never wrinkle, and a sleepless mind that fritzes into fugue states she pretends are harmless. After the unsolved shooting death of her older brother years back in San Jose, Mara learned to quantify fear and keep moving.

Then a courier delivers an invitation encased in a palm-sized shard of tempered glass, its edge inked with a crosshair and a date. The Meridian, an elite private club with a subterranean range beneath the Old Main Post Office, opens its doors. There Mara meets Sabine Kroll, a dazzling philanthropist whose family name is etched onto half the benches in Millennium Park, and Colton Reyes, a former federal negotiator who calls himself a coach rather than a handler. At The Meridian, precision is a form of grace. The club boasts a humanitarian arm, Project Halo, that funds relocation for women fleeing violent partners and supplies trauma kits to clinics from Detroit to Juárez. Belonging feels like breath after a long hold.

But numbers whisper when you know how to listen. The probability curves Mara builds for Archer and Plaut begin aligning with obituaries, and the philanthropic disbursements from Project Halo map onto a shadow derivatives book someone is using to profit from sudden vacancies across boardrooms in Seattle, Charlotte, and Zurich. A ballistic report surfaces bearing her late brother's initials and a stamp from a weapon locker she thought only existed in a childhood nightmare. In a storage unit on Canal Street, behind her mother's old sewing machine, Mara finds a rain-warped folder labeled Glasshouse—inside, actuarial tables written in her father's tight engineer script. He died a decade ago. Or so everyone said.

As Chicago swelters under a heat advisory, Mara pieces together a scheme that turns lives into numbers and numbers into blood. The Meridian selects targets to shatter markets; Archer and Plaut prices the fallout; Project Halo launders the goodwill. Sabine is not just a benefactor—she is kin through a long-quiet affair that twisted two families into one silence. The final ledger confronts Mara on the forty-seventh floor of 150 North Riverside, storm glass bowing, the river below black as a gun barrel. She can play along and live, or reroute the algorithm so the crosshair returns to the shooter. Wickedly twisty, Shattered Target is a psychological and corporate thriller about prestige, betrayal, and the ruinous legacy of secrets, where every model can be gamed and every truth recalibrated after the last, shattering shot.

Williams, Chen is a Chinese American writer and former risk analyst who grew up in Monterey Park, California. After earning a degree in applied mathematics from UC San Diego, Chen spent a decade building predictive models for insurance and logistics firms in Manhattan and Chicago. That behind-the-scenes work with data and corporate decision-making informs the tense, tech-literate worlds of their fiction. Chen has published short thrillers in regional magazines, taught evening seminars on narrative structure at a community arts center in Logan Square, and was a 2023 resident at a Midwestern writers retreat. They split time between Chicago and Taichung, speak conversational Mandarin, and are an avid night cyclist along the lakefront.

Ratings & Reviews

Jia Wen
2026-01-31

For readers who gravitate to corporate-conspiracy thrillers with psychological shading and minimal gore. Content notes: firearm violence, stalking menace, medical trauma references, fugue states, financial crimes, and family secrets. Recommend to adults who enjoy ethical puzzles and Chicago settings more than nonstop action.

Sloane Whitaker
2026-01-10

Mixed feelings:
- Slick concept with an actuarial twist
- Chilly prose that fits Mara
- Convoluted last-third logistics
- Corporate intrigue more engaging than club theatrics

Worth a borrow if you like strategy over chase scenes.

Miguel Arce
2025-12-01

Chicago hums here: a West Loop loft, the Old Main Post Office with a range sunk beneath it, heat shimmering off the river, institutional corridors cooled to museum temps; the civic gloss sits next to the underground economy of trauma kits and hush money. It's evocative, but the urban texture never quite deepens into rules or consequences, so the Meridian's exclusivity and Archer and Plaut's machinery feel like stage dressing for a scheme rather than systems with their own weather.

Priya Raman
2025-09-12

The math sings; the story stumbles.

Chapters juggle timelines and memos with clinical polish, but the structural neatness bleeds tension. The middle third drowns in firm-wide briefings and probability riffs that reiterate what we already know, and when momentum returns near the riverside showdown, it leans on explanatory monologues that flatten surprise. The ideas are sharp, the architecture tidy, yet the beats arrive like scheduled reports instead of shocks.

Theo McCarthy
2025-07-05

Mara Lin is built from ratios and risk curves, and that could be fascinating, but her inner life is locked behind jargon.

The husband, an ER doctor, registers as a voicemail more than a person; scenes feel engineered to keep him offstage so the conspiracy can breathe.

Sabine Kroll glitters, Colton Reyes shepherds, yet their contradictions land like reveals queued by a scheduler. When you tell me Sabine is kin through an old silence, I need the ache, not just the data.

Even Mara's grief over her brother reads like a legend on a chart. I never sensed a choice that truly cost her, so the final ledger feels like a tidy switch rather than a rupture.

There are sparks in the dialogue, a few hard, clean lines that cut. But the people here keep bowing to the outline.

Darla Nunez
2025-06-15

I closed Shattered Target angry. This story worships efficiency while pretending to question it. The line that it "turns lives into numbers and numbers into blood" isn't a warning here; it's the sales pitch.

The Meridian's subterranean range and Project Halo's saintly veneer are framed like prestigious accessories, and the shooter's crosshair etched on glass plays as chic branding. I kept waiting for the narrative to interrogate that seduction, but it keeps smoothing the edges until the violence feels like an actuarial instrument.

There is prestige, betrayal, legacy, yes; there is also a numbing belief that a cleaner model fixes the wound it caused. We move from boardrooms in Seattle, Charlotte, Zurich to a bowing storm glass, and the bodies feel like inputs adjusted for volatility.

Mara's fugue states are showcased as a clever device instead of a cracked psyche; trauma turns into a mood filter. The philanthropic disbursements align with a shadow book, and the book winks as if it has solved morality with a spreadsheet.

I wanted mess, consequence, awe. Instead I got a cold sermon on optimization with better stationery.

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