Celestial Warden's Oath

Celestial Warden's Oath

Fantasy · 416 pages · Published 2024-11-12 · Avg 3.8★ (6 reviews)

Home is where the sky remembers your name—and this one is heavy with omens. The award-winning fantasist behind The Moonshard Ledger returns with a brand-new tale set among the wind-carved towers of Everspire, where maps are inked in starlight and vows outlast mountains. Liora Fen never planned to climb the Spiral Steps again, not after the Guild rescinded her starcartographer's seal and her savings turned into a box of useless promissory slips. But when the Aureline Consortium begins circling her mother's Observatory of Glass like gulls after a storm, she tells her family she's coming home to negotiate, to protect what's theirs. She does not tell them the constellations that once murmured directions in her ear have gone silent, their music muted as if a hand had smothered the heavens.

Now that she is back, Liora refuses to sleep on a pallet beside her mother's crates of broken astrolabes or share her brother's cot above the Tidemarket. Fortunately, the newly appointed Celestial Warden of Everspire—an outsider with a room to spare in his watch-house—needs coin. Unfortunately, his tower is rife with star-echoes: pale, watchful remnants of constellations that chill the corridors and turn her breath to frost. Liora has never tolerated the cold shoulder, not from family, not from sky.

Orren Thale is absolutely and entirely fine. Truly. He did not come to Everspire to outrun the Night Parliament's inquiry into what happened under the Black Meridian. He just wanted clean air, quieter skies, fewer questions. When he agrees to let the sharp-eyed mapmaker live beneath his observatory dome, he does not know she speaks to the dark like it might answer, or that she would look like stubbornness carved into a smile. But as market-days turn to meteor showers, the lines between oath and choice blur, and the forces that linger in Orren's tower begin to take sides. The Crowned Ibex slips restless from its appointed stars. The broken astrolabe Vespera ticks to a rhythm only Liora can hear. When the Consortium's ledgers and the Parliament's edicts grind toward the Observatory of Glass, Liora and Orren must decide which vows they will keep, and which they will break, to mend a sky that has stopped speaking—and to discover whether a temporary roof can shelter something more permanent than either of them intended.

Holloway, Arthur (b. 1984) is a British-American fantasy author and former museum guide who studied medieval literature and the history of science at the University of Exeter. After several years working night programs at the Royal Observatory, Greenwich—where he developed an obsession with antique sextants—he moved to the Pacific Northwest and began writing full-time. His short fiction has appeared in Starline Review and Gossamer Atlas, and his novels are known for blending intimate character work with cosmic folklore. He lives in Portland with his partner, a rescue greyhound, and a telescope named Vespera.

Ratings & Reviews

Sienna Kovács
2025-10-10

I came for star-maps and vows, but the story kept slipping on its own ice. The star-echoes are creepy-cool at first, then they muzzle the rooms so much that every scene feels dimmed instead of charged.

Imagine the courtly melancholy of Witchmark meeting the apprenticeship urgency of The Tethered Mage. Now strip out the spark that makes conversations crackle, and replace it with ledgers and edicts that march in circles. That is how Everspire read to me.

Liora's crisis is compelling on paper, yet her voice flattens whenever the negotiations start, as if someone put a cloth over the telescope. Orren insists he is fine, again and again, until the refrain stops sounding like character work and starts sounding like a stall.

The pacing lurches. Market scenes linger, meteor nights rush past, and the Spiral Steps show up like a symbol underlined three times. I was frustrated enough to set the book down more than once.

There are glints of wonder, yes, but they feel rationed. By the time the Observatory of Glass is truly in jeopardy, my patience had iced over.

Priya Deshmukh
2025-07-18

For readers who like contemplative fantasy with romance simmering, this hits the spot.

  • Wind-cut cityscapes and strange astronomy
  • Slow-burn roommates-to-something
  • Negotiation scenes that matter
  • Occasional chill from star-echoes overstays
Ana Lucia Mendez
2025-04-30

Promises, ownership, and stewardship thread through the novel: who gets to name the sky, and who only borrows it for a while. I loved how Liora wrestles with legacy and debt while Orren tiptoes around institutional guilt, the two of them testing whether oath and choice can share a home. The book keeps returning to the idea that "the sky remembers her name," and the resonance lands without sentimentality. If the ending conversations run a touch long, the questions they raise about listening versus speaking are worth the extra breath.

Émile Girard
2025-02-14

Liora revient à Everspire sans la musique des constellations, et cela raye son orgueil d'un trait fragile. Orren jure qu'il va bien, mais ses silences et les couloirs gelés racontent autre chose. Leur duo avance doucement, parfois trop prudemment, pourtant chaque regard compte.

Rowan Calder
2024-12-05

Fen's chapters and Thale's chapters mirror each other without redundancy, a neat alternation that lets the silence in the sky echo through both heads. The middle third loosens its grip when negotiations spool into bookkeeping, yet the prose keeps a tensile shimmer; sentences bend toward sound without turning purple. Scene transitions from market bustle to meteor hush are handled with care, and the final movements align character choice with cosmic consequence.

Jamal Whitaker
2024-11-20

Everspire feels lived-in, all wind-carved parapets and markets that trade in currents as much as coin. The star-echoes in Orren's tower are unsettling and beautiful, a chorus of chill that keeps the rooms honest. I loved how the Crowned Ibex strains against its constellation while the broken astrolabe Vespera nags at time, the city listening whether it wants to or not. The Observatory of Glass is more than architecture. It is a promise, and the book treats it that way. Even the Spiral Steps read like a memory you climb back into.

I could smell the frost and ink.

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