Unspoken Promises in Paris

Unspoken Promises in Paris

Romance · 336 pages · Published 2023-06-06 · Avg 4.4★ (5 reviews)

Lina Morales and Théo Laurent were the kind of pair that made strangers smile on the métro: espresso and madeleines, bridges and the Seine, fogged windows and fingertip hearts. Except now—for reasons neither can say without unraveling—they're not. They ended things six months ago, quietly, then tucked the silence into their carry-ons. And yet Paris will not let them stay separate: Colette Arnaud, the owner of the blue-shuttered bookshop that gathered their makeshift family for a decade, has left behind a will with a condition, a scavenger trail she calls "La Promesse Muette." If Lina and Théo complete it in seven days, the lease is theirs to protect for everyone they love.

Every spring, Lina, Théo, Nadia, Jules, Baptiste, and Amara squeezed into the Saint-Paul walk-up over "La Librairie des Promesses": they ate Comté and apricot confiture off chipped plates, drank Sancerre from mismatched glasses, bought oysters at Marché d'Aligre, and took Vélib bikes past the sunlit quays. Only this year the shelves are half-packed, the landlord's papers stamped in red, and Colette's keys sit inside a velvet pouch on the counter. Most of the furniture is gone, so Lina and Théo end up in the slanted attic room with the big skylight, pretending the ceiling beams aren't a litany of memories.

Clue by clue, Paris becomes a map of the life they almost kept: a music box retrieved from a hidden drawer at Shakespeare and Company; a metro ticket punched with a pattern that reads like Braille; a brass key frozen into a block of apricot ice at Berthillon; a negative tucked behind a dented Rolleiflex at the Marché des Enfants Rouges. Their friends bicker and buoy and distract, a developer's assistant lurks with a briefcase, and Lina and Théo talk in logistics—opening hours, bus routes, baguette quality—because the one conversation that matters still catches in their throats: New York's fellowship versus Paris's family, a father who needs help versus a future they drew in notebook margins.

As the week unspools—Fête de la Musique thrumming under their ribs, a storm turning Pont Neuf into a silver curtain, a late-night waltz on tiled kitchen floors—their unspoken promises tug taut. By the time the bells ring across Île de la Cité on Sunday, a lockbox may open, a bookstore might be saved, and the truth that broke them could be the only language that holds. It would be airtight, if plans ever survived cobblestones, café steam, and Paris traffic. After years of loving each other without the right words, how hard can it be to finally speak—just for one week, in a city built on vows nobody knows how to say?

Isabella Chapman was born in 1986 in Exeter, England, and grew up between Devon and Montreal. She studied comparative literature at McGill University and earned an M.A. in contemporary letters from Sorbonne Nouvelle. After a stint as a copy editor in London and a translator's assistant in Paris, she began writing fiction that lingers on art, found families, and the stubborn geographies of love. Her short work has appeared in small Canadian and UK journals, and she has taught creative writing workshops in Aix-en-Provence. She lives in Marseille with her partner, a photographer, and a rescue mutt named Fig. When she isn't writing, she can be found haunting flea markets for old cameras and speaking franglais with embarrassing enthusiasm.

Ratings & Reviews

Oliver Grant
2025-08-14

Under the love story sits a conversation about caretaking, ambition, and the languages we use when language fails. The scavenger clues transform avoidance into attention, turning logistics into a kind of prayer, and the bookstore becomes a proxy for choosing community over comfort. By the time bells echo over Île de la Cité, the motif of "a city built on vows no one knows how to say" lands with a tender, earned ache.

Cassie Romero
2024-11-05

Paris here is more than ambience. Markets, bikes, brass keys in apricot ice, a storm silvering Pont Neuf, music ringing across the islands: each setting is a stage mark that nudges Lina and Théo toward choice. Even the suited assistant with a briefcase feels like the city's counterpoint, an efficient metronome against street rhythms. The result is cozy without being airbrushed.

Étienne Morel
2024-06-24

Lina and Théo are that rare pair whose silence says more than most declarations. Their "logistics" talk about bakery schedules and bus lines is a fluent disguise for longing, and the friends orbiting them offer texture without stealing the center.

I loved how their private grammar shifts from joking deflection to clear-eyed courage in the slanted attic room.

Rhea Kapoor
2023-12-01

The novel balances a lyrical sentence-by-sentence glow with the playful rigor of a scavenger puzzle. Each clue folds back into the couple's shared history, so the hunt never feels like a gimmick. It becomes character architecture. I did feel the middle Tuesday-Wednesday stretch lingers a touch too lovingly on errands, but the restraint around the core conflict keeps the final conversations sharp and satisfying.

Maya Chen
2023-07-10

Seven days, a bookstore on the line, and two exes who read each other better than any map. The clues click like metro doors and the ending hums with earned warmth.

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