Whispers in Cedarwood

Whispers in Cedarwood

Literary Fiction · 352 pages · Published 2023-10-10 · Avg 3.5★ (6 reviews)

Some stories grow roots deeper than graves. For roommates Lena Grady and Rory Vale, Cedarwood Conservatory—tucked between a millpond and blocks of Victorian rentals—was supposed to be reinvention: late-night mixtapes cracked with static, paper lanterns strung from the rafters of Wren Hall, the dizzy promise of being seen as someone new. But the town had its own folklore, a bruise they were warned not to press—the Drowned Choir, a string of music students pulled from the pond between 1974 and 1996, each case smoothed into accident or melancholy. As an aspiring archivist, Lena is drawn to the artifacts of the unquiet: a conductor's baton engraved J.K., a rehearsal logbook with pages torn out, an anonymous zine stapled crooked and left in the practice rooms. She wanders the amphitheater at blue hour, swears she hears harmony under the reeds, and writes everything down, even the dreams. The more she digs, the more she suspects the legend is less myth than ledger, a list of debts unsettled by the school. Curiosity hardens into obsession, secrets curdle in the space between best friends, and a winter night at the boathouse ends in a break neither of them will forgive.

Nearly twenty years later, Lena is an assistant city archivist in Arbor City, newly settled on Meadow Loop with a tidy backyard and a baby on the way, practicing the grammar of a life that looks good from the sidewalk. News arrives like black ice: Rory has been found at the edge of Cedarwood Lake. Named executor for reasons that bruise and confuse, Lena returns to the cedar-shingled cottage on Wren Street to box up a life preserved with unsettling care—sourdough starter alive on the counter, a cardigan zipped and waiting on a chair, an Olivetti Lettera with a ribbon that still stains the fingers. She discovers microcassettes labeled "Whisper Fieldwork," Polaroids of the amphitheater stamped with dates and a pale thumb, a hand-drawn map threaded with red cotton, library checkout slips tucked into dog-eared scores. In the bright, ordinary rooms of the house, Rory seems to drift back: a scent of cold lilacs in August, a shadow in the glass over the sink, the faint caught-breath of a choir warming up. Lena begins to think Rory left instructions, a music only she is meant to hear. As she follows the trail she didn't know she was setting with her friend all those years ago, the secret she buried after the boathouse fire—the lie she told to keep one life from collapsing—starts to splinter her suburban safety. Told across past and present, Whispers in Cedarwood braids a mystery with the slow ache of girlhood, asking how friendship ferments into myth, how grief becomes a language, and what it costs to finally learn whose voices the town chose to drown and whose it refused to hear.

Emma S. Thornton grew up on the New Hampshire seacoast and studied folklore and archival studies at the University of Vermont. After working as a bookseller and a public library archivist, she completed an MFA at a small program in the Pacific Northwest, where she began writing fiction about memory, place, and the stories towns tell about themselves. Her short work has appeared in regional journals and anthologies, and she has taught community workshops on family histories and oral storytelling. She lives in Portland, Oregon, with her spouse and a very old dog.

Ratings & Reviews

Elena Petrov
2025-08-09

For book clubs that favor atmosphere over twists and for patrons drawn to quiet campus mysteries, especially fans of Julia Fine or Katie Kitamura. Content notes for discussion guides include drowning deaths in the past, a boathouse fire, pregnancy anxiety, and persistent grief. Strong pick for adult collections and mature teens ready for layered timelines.

Nathaniel Roy
2025-04-18

As a meditation on memory and who gets archived, this mostly lands.

  • haunting lake myth, archival trail
  • patient pacing, sometimes too static
  • sharp motifs of debt and silence
  • ending earns a sigh, not a gasp
Priya Ocampo
2024-12-05

Fog, reeds, echoing practice rooms, and a town that keeps adjusting its memory make for a place so textured I could smell the wet cedar.

Hannah Brodie
2024-07-20

I kept waiting for the story to choose momentum.

The setup promises a mournful mystery, but the investigation drifts. Scene after scene lingers on objects that feel like props instead of pressure. I was patient. I was ready to be haunted. Instead I felt stranded.

Think Emily Fridlund crossed with Idra Novey, then water it down. The language wants to be a spell, yet the cadence repeats until it turns sing-song, and the tension slides away.

The Drowned Choir is a compelling idea, and the boathouse incident should crack the book open. It does not. By the time the trail of tapes and Polaroids loops back on itself, I could see the seams and not the story.

I love slow burns. This is not slow burn so much as low flame, a steady flicker that never finds oxygen. Disappointed.

Darius Wen
2024-03-02

Lena and Rory feel like two sides of the same need, one to document, one to disappear. Their banter rings true and the slippages between tenderness and rivalry are painfully familiar, though I wanted a touch more heat in the present-day chapters where Lena circles the cottage and her old guilt. The restraint fits their personalities, but it blurs some beats that should sting.

Marisol Keane
2023-11-14

The novel treats structure like a score, letting past and present echo without turning muddy. Chapters open with small relics and close on the aftersound of a note, which keeps the pace contemplative yet forward.

Its signature move is the archive-as-engine: microcassettes, checkout slips, the Olivetti. The prose is precise and cool, occasionally almost too controlled, but the cumulative argument about who keeps records and who gets erased lands with quiet force.

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