Veil of Unseen Consequences

Veil of Unseen Consequences

Suspense · 344 pages · Published 2024-05-14 · Avg 3.5★ (6 reviews)

A propulsive suspense novel about a risk analyst racing to dismantle a revenge engine before it detonates her family and an entire city.

In seven days, the Veil Protocol will go live. After a decade modeling chain reactions for Harbor & Pike in Boston, Mara Ellison trusts numbers more than people. Then a black envelope arrives on her desk containing a silk mourning veil, a disposable phone, and a message: "Count your debts." An anonymous architect has built a decision tree of real-world triggers that will culminate in a catastrophic data dump implicating her father, the revered head of Ellison Therapeutics in Providence. Each sunrise brings another "nudge"—an elevator stall in the Prudential Center, a misrouted EMS call in Allston, a timed blackout during WaterFire on the Woonasquatucket—small incidents that spool panic into policy failures.

Mara's list of suspects is painfully intimate: Gavin Roe, her cybersecurity-expert ex who knows her passwords and blind spots; her estranged sister Lena, freshly returned from an activist collective in Pawtucket; and Dr. Francine Holt, the Tufts advisor who taught Mara to map consequences like constellations. With only her cranky neighbor Theo Parr—a disgraced investigative podcaster with a police scanner and a battered Saab 900—Mara builds a war room of corkboard and red twine, chasing clues from the Longfellow Bridge to a shuttered mill off Broad Street in Central Falls.

Behind a false wall, the Veil hums: a rack of servers, a live dashboard, a countdown at 00:07:19. Every choice Mara makes rebalances the tree—and costs someone else. As alarms scream and the river fog thickens, she realizes the architect learned the math of guilt at her own kitchen table. To stop the final cascade, Mara must uncover the one debt her family buried, and decide which consequence she can live with.

David Theobold grew up in Warwick, Rhode Island, and studied systems engineering at Northeastern University before spending a decade as a risk analyst for a Boston-based insurer. He later earned an MFA from the University of Massachusetts Amherst, where he taught writing and researched how small failures ripple through complex systems. His essays and short fiction have appeared in The Common, Boulevard, and Yankee Magazine. A recipient of a 2021 Massachusetts Cultural Council Artist Fellowship in Fiction, he lives in Northampton, Massachusetts, with his partner and a retired greyhound. When not writing, he restores vintage bicycles and volunteers with the Connecticut River Conservancy.

Ratings & Reviews

Bethany Carlisle
2025-08-01

For readers who like procedural puzzles with a human center, this sits between corporate thriller and domestic fallout. The Boston to Providence setting will appeal to New Englanders who enjoy real streets and civic rituals anchoring their suspense.

Content notes for selectors and classrooms include non-graphic injuries, doxxing, cyber intrusion, stalking, blackout-related panic, and references to corporate malfeasance. Suitable for mature teens who can handle ethical ambiguity, and for adult book clubs that enjoy hashing out tradeoffs after the final chapter. Not a twist factory, more a slow tightening.

Lionel Ko
2025-05-09

My ledger on Veil of Unseen Consequences

  • Sharp local color, especially WaterFire and the Longfellow Bridge
  • Repeated "nudges" feel contrived by the third occurrence
  • Suspect pool too tidy, emotional beats become predictable
  • Countdown motif overused, tension flattens in the middle
Marta Quiñones
2025-01-14

Malls, bridges, rivers, and hospital switchboards become chess pieces here, and the book nails the texture of those systems under stress. The Prudential elevator snag, the Allston EMS tangle, and the WaterFire blackout feel like plausible results of tiny misalignments, not movie magic. The shuttered mill in Central Falls and the drive over the Longfellow Bridge give the story a corridor of space that feels lived-in and precarious. If you like your stakes grounded in infrastructure instead of spy gadgets, this absolutely sings.

Keenan Lowell
2024-08-02

Mara is a fascinating bundle of caution and compulsion, an analyst who keeps trying to turn grief into math. Her history with Gavin Roe and the raw tension with Lena give the investigation a bruised pulse, while Dr. Holt looms like a favorite teacher you no longer trust. The best surprise is the way Theo refuses to be a caricature, cutting through Mara's models with radio static and old-school instincts. Some conversations loop the same doubt, shaving momentum.

Theo steals scenes without ever eclipsing Mara.

Rucha Desai
2024-06-10

The author structures the novel like a live model, with chapters that fork along decisions and revise probabilities. Ellison's narration toggles between present-tense chase scenes and lucid memos; the alternation keeps stakes both intimate and systemic.

Occasionally the war room scenes over-explain what the reader already infers, and the middle third circles the same three suspects once too often. But the closer the story gets to Providence, the sharper the sentences get, right up to a clean, earned finish.

Haley Munroe
2024-05-20

Veil of Unseen Consequences is less about sabotage than it is about moral arithmetic, and I loved it. Every choice clicks into the next like gears, and that click is pure adrenaline.

From the first black envelope to the hum behind the false wall, the novel keeps asking who owes what. The countdown feels like a metronome for guilt.

Those "nudges" feel fiendishly plausible, from an elevator stall in the Prudential Center to a misrouted EMS call in Allston to the lights going out during WaterFire.

Mara's mantra becomes "Count your debts." Watching her test each branch of the tree hurt in the best way, because the math is never abstract. It lives at the kitchen table, where families teach each other what to ignore.

Themes of inheritance, accountability, and chosen consequence hit hard. And Theo Parr, saint of battered Saabs and stubborn decency, made me cheer out loud. Five stars, no hedging.

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