In the Shadows of the Wyverns

In the Shadows of the Wyverns

Fantasy · 464 pages · Published 2021-11-09 · Avg 3.8★ (6 reviews)

The war against the Marrow Regent is going badly: even Cloudmere's stonebound councils and the river guilds of Embergate are taking notice. Rion Ashfell scans the obituary columns and Sky-Lantern Rolls of The Brass Herald looking for familiar names. Archon Iyra Vell is absent from the High Aerie Lyceum for long stretches, and the Circle of Winds has already suffered losses. And yet...as in all wars, life threads on. Sixth-year apprentices learn to Slipstep—vanishing from one tower and stumbling into the next in a gust of singed air—and lose a few eyebrows in the process. The twins Cinder and Jest expand their prankworks stall at Smoke Market. Teenagers flirt and fight on the rope-bridges between dormitories. Lessons are never straightforward, though Rion receives extraordinary help from a nameless, long-vanished mage whose tart marginalia fills a battered grimoire. The school whispers call the author the Half-Scaled Scribe, and their notes are ingenious, intimate, and sometimes perilous.

It is the home front that takes center stage while wyvern wings blacken the horizon. Rion tries to uncover the identity of the Half-Scaled Scribe, the previous owner of his windcraft compendium, "Treatise on Vents and Vipers," whose pages are veined with moonwound ink and sly amendments that turn harmless puffs into razor squalls. But his life tips forever when Aunt Maela—lighthouse-warden of Wyvernwatch and the woman who raised him—is murdered before his eyes by a masked rider piping a bone flute that makes the shadows heel like dogs.

With Archon Vell's terse guidance and a ring of forbidden sky-keys, Rion follows wind-trails into the buried past: temple vaults cracked open under Needlecliff, saltglass catacombs beneath Kettleford, letters penned by a clever, lonely boy named Tareth Coilborn who would one day call himself the Marrow Regent and bind his will to an ancient wyvern called Gravecoil. What emerges is not pure monster nor pure myth, but a map of hungers. Somewhere within it lies a single soft place, thin as frost at dawn. To reach it, Rion must decide what he is willing to break—oaths, friendships, perhaps his own name—and what must remain unbroken, even as the wyverns close their shadows over the sun.

Meredith Gale is an American fantasy writer and former field naturalist. Raised on the coast of Maine, she studied folklore and environmental history at the University of Massachusetts Amherst (M.A., 2009) and spent her twenties surveying raptor migrations and cataloging lichen in state forests. Her short fiction has appeared in regional journals and small-press anthologies, and her novella "Ash Crown, Water Crown" was a finalist for the Larkspur Award in 2018. Known for wind-haunted settings and sharp, character-driven narratives, she has taught community workshops on mythmaking and bookbinding. Gale lives in Ithaca, New York, with a rescue greyhound and too many houseplants.

Ratings & Reviews

Gideon Adekoya
2025-08-30

My notes for fellow readers below.

  • strange school scenes with humor
  • inventive windcraft tricks
  • meandering middle quests
  • thin momentum after the murder
  • better fit for readers who enjoy contemplative war backdrops
  • comps toward Andrea Stewart's slower arcs or R.J. Barker's sailborne mood
Rowan Pike
2025-02-19

I came for wyverns and war drums and found a book that argues with itself about mercy and hunger. My heart thrummed.

This is a story obsessed with what we break and what we refuse to break. Oaths, friendships, names, the thin thread of a boy raised by a lighthouse keeper.

The past is not an excuse, yet it explains so much. The letters from the clever, lonely child are knives wrapped in paper, and Rion reads them like someone trying to see his own reflection in a storm.

There is one idea that stunned me, a single sentence that felt like a lantern in fog, "a cartography of hungers" that maps not just a villain but a city and a school and a boy who refuses to become what the wind demands.

Yes, the skies darken, yes, the wyverns close in, but the real battle lives in choices made in quiet halls. I am buzzing, and I will be thinking about this for a long time.

Elodie Bhatt
2024-06-12

The setting hums with odd, convincing machinery. Slipstep training singes eyebrows, moonwound ink veins a battered grimoire into something half alive, and shadows answer to a bone flute like disciplined hounds.

Cloudmere's councils, Embergate's river guilds, and those Sky-Lantern Rolls make the world feel wider with every mention, while rings of sky-keys and wind-trails into catacombs promise history that matters. It is beautiful and a little dangerous, which is exactly what I want from skybound fantasy.

Darius Holt
2023-01-28

Rion is written with a wary tenderness, always scanning names, always braced for another loss, and the moment with Aunt Maela burns through everything he thinks he knows about safety. His choices from that point feel less like destiny and more like a teenager trying to keep a promise while the ground moves under his feet.

The supporting cast gives him texture. Archon Vell's clipped mentorship, the twins' chaotic energy at Smoke Market, even the sarcastic margin-voice of the Half-Scaled Scribe all push and pull against him in ways that feel human.

Sofía Marín
2022-03-07

El libro brilla en su textura, con apuntes del Escriba a medias escamado que atraviesan el grimorio con ingenio, y la voz de Rion mantiene una melancolía contenida sin perder curiosidad. Las escenas en la escuela tienen chispa y un sentido lúdico que contrasta con el duelo.

A veces la estructura pierde equilibrio; las excursiones a Needlecliff y a las catacumbas de sal se sienten repetitivas y restan empuje al conflicto central. Aun así, la imaginería del viento y los "Sky-Lantern Rolls" sostienen el interés. 3.5? No, redondeo a 3 porque me dejó más admiración técnica que emoción.

Marla Chen
2021-11-15

A war-torn school story where wyvern shadows loom, a bone flute killer shatters Rion's world, and the hunt for the Half-Scaled Scribe threads urgency through studies, pranks, and grief.

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